Wednesday, April 13, 2011
Westpac Visit
Our six people that fundraise go to westpac was was me Shirlee, Jordan, trinity, Geogia, Savannah and Jackson..... We were at westpac us meeted the westpac manager, Jackson gave the money to the lady that collects all the money and we took some photos after that we got westpac ginger beer (YUMMY). Us walked to the secret place where the hidden money is, there was two machine that had the money in 1 big one and 1 small one it really looks real..... We went to the park an ate our YUMMY subway and drinking our westpac ginger beer!! it was a very an EXCITing lunch time!! ^_^
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It was an exciting lunch time wasn't it? Shirlee next time you go on the blog can you read through this post and see what changes you need to make to make it make sense. Some words need to be written in the past tense rather than the present. If you need help, let me know.
ReplyDeleteThere is some words that could be at the beginning of a sentence but the rest is good.
ReplyDeletenick store sherly
ReplyDeleteWas it fun getting a reward.
ReplyDeleteof course
ReplyDeleteOh man I wish I could get a drink
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