Hi my name is Kellen and this is my story. Abseiling is walking down a wall with a harness and a rope or two. On the way up mr talsma was saying that he would not let me do anything that wasn't safe. I was shaking on the way up. Each flight of steps.
Kellen now afence but you need more detail
ReplyDeleteI really like the intrductory sentence. It grabs my attention. It feels like you have something to write about. It makes me think that everybody has a story to tell.
ReplyDeletewow kellen thats awsome yours is better than mine even though mine was the first ine up on the wall
ReplyDeletesorry i've got most of it rong
ReplyDeleteGreat work and I hope you keep it up. You are also the man.
ReplyDeleteNice work Kellen. What a nice post and you included your fellings. If these keyboards had ticks I would give you three. :D
ReplyDeleteNice start and I hope you keep it up. I got one more thing to say you are a monkey master.
ReplyDeletecool story man
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