Wednesday, May 21, 2014


PLUTO

Pluto  ran like a storm thundering down the forest turning right and left through the bushes.Pluto is jumping like a Kangaroo up and down through the desert . these are my similes.I like my travel buddy Pluto because he is cool and nice but sometimes i get board with him. Yesterday I left him in my brothers toy box. He was feeling lonely but I took him out of there and he is happy again.
Today I brought Pluto to school he was happy to be in my class. 

  
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  1. AnonymousMay 22, 2014 at 8:36 AM

    good work akansha shanae

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  2. AnonymousMay 22, 2014 at 9:41 AM

    Cool simile's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    From Lee

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  3. AnonymousMay 26, 2014 at 8:43 AM

    Great work on your writing akansha.

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  4. Mr TMay 26, 2014 at 8:53 PM

    What a well constructed sentence with a simile in it. It really captured the mood and imagery of Pluto running strong and fearlessly. Well Done!! Where would you put the comas so that it is a true complex sentence?

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  5. AnonymousMay 29, 2014 at 8:30 AM

    Just remember where to put your commers but without that fantastic story!

    grace

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