I went to Raglan with my friends, they said "hop in" "have some fun"!! They were acting like the water was warm. I put my feet in and I am like "OMG" my feet are like an ice cube frozen in a freezer. So I stayed in there for a bit longer.10mins later It started to get warmer as the minute goes on.The my friends started to do canobombs and the splashes were very big. it was like a big whale flipping with a big as splash that wets me!!!
It felt like a big bucket of rain splashed on me!!! It was cold like an icy cold freezer.
Great work. You will need to go back and edit and proof read it as per our conversation and your good copy in your PR Book.
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